Unfaithful Love
My love makes waiting for me forever
Fairy of winter whom are brilliant falling to the sky
Kiss on his smile but not alive
Walk together on the line
Broken promise that was just said
He is always with me
but never come back to me as friend
My old days
all that I want to be burned
erase them from my mind
cause I like you, miss you
kiss convey hundred millions of tears
can I still like you
My love makes waiting for me forever
though I’ve made the mistaken
never e’ver forget you
though the time pass and there’s another love
I’ll think of you, the first love
But forgive me what I’ve done
1. great form
ReplyDelete2. awesome job keeping the same theme (love/hate thing) right??:)
greeeeeeat job! i like this poem the best:))
ReplyDeleteespecially the theme, correct form